vanessa feliciano

Rookie - 0 Points (9/11/94 / Charlotte NC)

Bound - Poem by vanessa feliciano

To be bound is a terrible thing
Locked from the world
where morning birds sing.
Racked with terror
of your eternal caging
no one around you
you seem to go crazy
you wish for a way
to escape being bound
you wish and you wait
to just be found
the one thing you do
to help feeling free
is sit all alone
while thinking poetry

Comments about Bound by vanessa feliciano

  • (1/12/2010 9:23:00 AM)

    Good Poem Vanessa, I feel poetry is an escape into freedom sometimes too. Do use a spellchecker though, mistakes distract readers from the message, David. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/19/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    Solitude can sometimes bring out the best poems but to be bound ain't good
    like free Betty which I wrote...4 chickens in a tiny cage all their life laying eggs!
    Your poem has a good story line
    avaluvli xmas
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  • (12/17/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    Believe in the power of your dreams! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, September 29, 2011

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