Breaking Point Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Breaking Point

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Getting closer and closer
to that fine border line,
Are you ok?
That famous question,
Yes i'm doing fine!
Breaking point.
It's staring me in the face,
Feeling like,
You're running out of space.
Let's get a grip,
Take the bull by the horns,
Face up to the life,
Weather the storm.
I refuse to give in,
My dreams won't be quashed,
I'll stand up tall,
When all seems lost.



Jayne Louise Davies

Friday, July 28, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: staring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 28 July 2023

Excellent piece....thanks for sharing..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 July 2023

Jayne Wonderful poem and I can relate so much Bravo! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 July 2023

I sincerely appreciate the spirit of determination reflected in the last four lines! An excellent poem dear poetess!

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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