Breathe Poem by Viola Grey

Well, have enough 'breathe' to chase away those wrong notions, Viola...i liked the powerful message inside you give...10

'I don't need you but I do for a whole other purpose than the obvious! ' Great read... loved it...

I love it! Fools and lovers falling from the same tree! Great turn of phrase. Strange message... I want you here to help me breathe. Whereas...you and your consistently brilliant writing takes my breath away. Your number one fan (but not in a Kathy Bates sort of way! !) Kev. x

Breathtaking, or breathgiving, lovely piece Viola, regards Tom

Absolutly beautiful poetry Viola....you draw the reader into your scene...Fi 10+++

that is what friends and lovers are for to help us breathe... and in the end they make our day easier... good job. Becca

I adore this poem. Breathing is never as simple and habitual as it is made up to be.10/10

I wear your breath on me all day I wonder if they notice I smell different [Orange Geometry]

Vivid and heartfelt with some awesome lines 10++++

You bring welcome light into shattered darkness, illuminating corners so long abandoned. ----------- Great flow of words here. So touching lines with fine imagery! ! !