Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 864 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

Breeze - Poem by Subbaraman N V

Breeze a great gift of nature
Embraces every one in its course
Cares not one's position or status
Treats all as equal sure of course!

God's grace showered on all
Cares not one is short or tall
Animate or inanimate
To one and all He is intimate!

Nature never discriminates
Nor its laws ever remonstrates
Ugly mind of the cruel man
Alone knows the art of scan
To inflict injuries on the innocent
And shower benefits to those with influence!

Cruel it is the honest suffers
Unfair it is the opposite prospers
How to end this nasty goings
And bring peace and poise in all the beings?

Comments about Breeze by Subbaraman N V

  • Gita Ashok (6/25/2010 5:53:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem! The first and last stanzas are brilliant. I admire the way you have used 'breeze' as the theme and converted it into a philosophy of life.10+++++ (Report) Reply

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  • (6/30/2008 4:12:00 AM)

    nature is benevolent. a fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • (6/13/2008 2:16:00 AM)

    the honest may suffer for sin done in some other context... yudhishtira in the epic Maha Bharatha is one example. i liked the imagery of breeze as a universal soother well wisher... (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2008 11:45:00 AM)

    I agree! Very nicely put. (Report) Reply

  • (1/2/2008 10:16:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed this piece. Well thought out and executed. Top marks!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 10, 2007

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 6, 2011

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