Bri Edwards At Home Poem by Belle Wassermeister

Bri Edwards At Home

Rating: ★5.0


Bri looks for the stars
but can't see a thing.
Then he sits and waits
for his phone to ring,
but he gets so bored
that he wants to scream
and heads to the fridge
to get more ice cream!

Bri Edwards At Home
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Syllabic verse. Five syllables per line. Bri knows the full story behind my inspiration for this poem.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 26 January 2023

Bri loves his ice cream; that's for sure!

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Belle Wassermeister 27 January 2023

I wonder what his favorite flavor is...

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But, Belle, you've estopped us from rating the poem. Why?

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Nice one. Unlike Bri who is often acidic, this poem is sweet as ice cream.5*

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Rob Lamberton 03 February 2023

Bri scream for ice cream!

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Kim Barney 26 January 2023

I love your use of syllabic verse here, and with rhyme! I have used it myself a few times.

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Kim Barney 26 January 2023

I think I know the story behind this. I will send you a private message to see if I am correct.

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Belle Wassermeister

Belle Wassermeister

Gleichen, Alberta, Canada
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