Bri looks for the stars
but can't see a thing.
Then he sits and waits
for his phone to ring,
but he gets so bored
that he wants to scream
and heads to the fridge
to get more ice cream!
But, Belle, you've estopped us from rating the poem. Why?
Nice one. Unlike Bri who is often acidic, this poem is sweet as ice cream.5*
I love your use of syllabic verse here, and with rhyme! I have used it myself a few times.
I think I know the story behind this. I will send you a private message to see if I am correct.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Bri loves his ice cream; that's for sure!
I wonder what his favorite flavor is...