Brief Encounter Poem by David Wood

Brief Encounter

Rating: 5.0


I saw you out the other day
And my heart skipped a beat,
One of those moments I can say
Where I paused and beat a retreat
And walked away downbeat.

I thought of the deep love we had
Moonlight walks on the beach,
The times when we were both so glad;
The good times now so out of reach
Where love was just a peach.

I remember your laugh, your eyes,
The wrinkle in your nose.
When we walked with the good and wise.
Now in the past, how time just goes.
How swift came love’s death throes.

Yes, I miss your soft lips, your kiss,
Your lovely sweet embrace
Yes, all those things I sadly miss,
Gazing upon your gentle face
You were so full of grace.

But you fell for another’s charm
And your heart turned to frost
And love had lost its soothing balm
To such, such, a terrible cost,
And I felt Oh' so lost.

Saturday, November 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It's only fiction,
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anais Vionet 03 December 2020

I really liked this - the clear narrative. I generally avoid rhyme myself - it can tend to come off forced. Poetry’s near corrosive drive to RHYME all the time is a crime.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 November 2015

Love is the key about life and, true love is not a decision. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 28 November 2015

And oh so real in many cases. Thanks, David

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 November 2015

Betrayal in love is always disastrous and very difficult to digest. Read the meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Shakil Ahmed 28 November 2015

you have painted your heartfelt passions very well in the poem, you have used beautiful images to portray your feelings, thanks for sharing

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