Baby Blue

Rookie (November 25,1988 / Pensacola)

Broken - Poem by Baby Blue

I’ve never seen a shattered heart,
That writhes in pain and anguish;
Torn at the seams and ripped apart:
Never again the same.

But no matter how much it hurts me,
I am happy to know,
I had but a moment to love and be with you,
Rather than an eternity alone.

So do this one thing I request,
Promise me you will mend your heart,
And never forget, that all my love:
Which you hold in your hands, shall never depart.


Comments about Broken by Baby Blue

  • Eyan Desir (4/7/2009 7:06:00 AM)

    BEautiful great
    write
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  • Blue Eyes (6/14/2008 11:34:00 AM)

    I loved this poem.It looks a real expression of feelings.
    i think that this is what poetry all about.
    I hope you read mine and give me your opinion.
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  • Malcolm Hetherington (2/6/2008 1:25:00 AM)

    Makes me cry...I've...ahh long story. great poem you should write a book of poems and get it published. everyone would love them. (Report)Reply

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  • Sarah Loves (11/25/2007 4:21:00 PM)

    love this one.

    sarah
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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 19, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011


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