I smiled trying, when love came crying,
In a pool of tears I tried finding,
Where the mud I fell in I tried washing,
Soaked still in the thoughts of past dirt,
A fall from height in hurt,
A Brut drink I seek for these thirst,
Whiles wine mocks this journey I trek,
A dry throat I feels on this desert,
As pain care a hoot to the eye,
A debris of a heart kept for the next eye,
Where skeptic seek the reality in sight,
Joy remains a threat on the empty streets,
As the next stroll I'm taking with fear treat.
Soaked still in the thoughts of past dirt, A fall from height in hurt, A Brut drink I seek for these thirst, ....joy remains a threat veryfine poem and thoughts. thank u dear poet. tony
A refined poetic imagination, Jcson. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
still I go on, do on; no obstacle can protest / bar me, ..... great write, come on poet, ..... congrats
It reads even better the second time. Super sentences of sadness but with a powerful potential for redemption!
Broken indeed! Well worded and thoughtfully titled is this compelling and captivating composition of emotional battlement and love and pain!
Thanks For all your congratulatory messages I really appreciate it
Congratulations! When love comes crying tear falls down and this provokes thought. This poem is very amazingly penned that carries emotion. A brilliant poem is shared. This is a perfect poem of the day...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Jcson, such a good imagery poem...10++++
Congrats, Jcson for being chosen for the day👍👍👍