Broken Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Broken

Rating: 5.0

Spring is gone and summers
here. But, my heart is broken
and I'm in tears. Sun has gone
down and fall is near, and I'm
filled with such emptiness and
fear. I look to the skies, I look
to the stars, but even the Heavens
feel so far.

Saturday, September 7, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,grief,loss,spring
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Koffi B Sossou 09 March 2025

A well-expressed heart break poem. Don't worry another spring on the way.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 March 2025

Brilliantly a Bravo Becca

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Anjandev Roy 09 March 2025

This is brilliant and perfect..... thanks for sharing....

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon 07 September 2024

Poignant, perturbing poem. When Spring is gone, all the hues and fragrances of life go with is vanish into thin air…hot.. top score

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