Lucifera Santez

Rookie - 304 Points (4th feb / Belize)

Broken Heart - Poem by Lucifera Santez

Castigation it was
A grave offendous sin
To be wanted, to be loved,
To have a soul that felt
And heart which beat
Its tethering terrifying thump
Banished I was,
An outlaw, a rebel
Fallen, a sinner
Because I loved, I cared
A burden I carry
They call it love
It burns, it soothes
And leaves my heart broken again
Can’t dissuade it,
Can’t accept it,
I just have to live with it
What a couple they are
A battered body and broken heart

Poet's Notes about The Poem

I wrote it the day my best friend's boyfriend cheated her with a girl we thought was our friend.

Comments about Broken Heart by Lucifera Santez

  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/8/2013 10:36:00 AM)

    But after the bad experiences come a new invigorating one. Never worry.
    And your words here are very fitting to every scene I see.
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  • (7/25/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    Great wording in this sad poem of your, very well penned dear.
    Siya_! !
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  • Zandile Zoya (7/22/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    keep writting and i will keep on reading. (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2013 8:31:00 PM)

    very delightful it least you found out or she found out a new liar... :) (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (6/18/2013 12:51:00 PM)

    Broken relationships are always very sad, especially when it is one-sided. But hearts can be mended in time. A lovely poem Lucifera. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (6/16/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    good poem, thanks, with love.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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