Falling on the ground
like a clinkig glass
once I was falling in love
now I'm falling apart
no one will ever love me
it's written in my fate
Shatered into pieces
my broken heart
So very sad, you 've penned it nicely...Marianna Jo Arolin
I really liked this poem. It is fantastic. Keep it up! Peace out, Lexi Baby
Splendid piece. Reminds me a lyric in my mother tongue Telugu 'His heart was like a glass Hit by a stony hearted woman broke into shattered pieces, his blood flowed as tears' Not exactly like this...it has its own beauty akin to language. Please read my long poem BROKEN HEART and comment
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a short but explicit piece of honesty. Very well put together.