Come Dear Come - (Dream In My Dreams) Poem by Asif Baloch
Come Dear Come - (Dream In My Dreams)
To whom you are talking, asif
they don't care if you weep or smile
they turned you into someone
who's scared of living and happy to die
Come dear come
I'm waiting for thee
my arms open wide
to grab you
to hold you
to hug you
and to become
one of a kind
Come dear come
you are the one
for whom
my eyes become barren
and turned into sand
now shalt not leave
take me with thee
to those mounts
and beautiful trees
there where
flowers do smile
and salsa dancing trees
to there where
happiness lives in the air
and sorrows left in despair
to there where
she's waiting for me
with so much love
and yearns filled eyes
yearn to hug me
love me for eternity
to that beautiful place
which i saw once
in my dreams
May your dream is fulfilled Asif, , , , , , , what a beautiful landscape! Nice writes.
Come dear come you are the one for whom my eyes become barren and turned into sand Sooo painfully beautiful... Asif bhai, no body needs to come to you, you have to find your love inside your inner self... Very well thought and wonderfully written poem... And leaves the reader craving for more... Well done...!
I love your ending it is superb! ! ! this is greatly written! ! ! excellent job. Becca
romancing into a dream...good ending, Aijaz...thanks for sharing...10
You spun a wonderful dream Asif. Salsa dancing, happiness, trees, love filled eyes, hugs to eternity. Wow! The title made a sweeping statement and your poem certainly came up to the standard of the title. 10 Karin Anderson
Beautiful poem.........I can feel the depths and weight of emotions......
Come dear come you are the one come to that paradise ahhhhhh! ! ! ! ! ! asif you dropp rubies pearls and diamonds all the way beautiful ---- you express so nicely another A+++++++ love anjali
Eyes are everything! Eyes! Yes. Then a smile. More eyes! ! Great.
i hope that your dreams will be fulfilled soon, nice thinking n dream. keep it up maryam
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Nice descriptive piece...thank you