Manonton Dalan

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Building-Thoughts >>> - Poem by Manonton Dalan

water, land and air
money food and home
day, work and product
things go in sequence
for every which way
there is always struggle
big. medium or small

what is mind limitation
we might not know, possible
we keep on going; thinking
repetition of thoughts is virus
it will stress you to slimness
I refuse to do that, sleep thief
take care of yourself, be focus

Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts


Comments about Building-Thoughts >>> by Manonton Dalan

  • (1/20/2016 11:34:00 AM)


    Thoughts can certainly rob us of sleep. We have to control them. We must learn to separate useless thoughts from productive ones. I like the way your poem reminds us how wonderful our minds are. Good job. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 19, 2016



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