Luis Gil de la Puente

Rookie - 327 Points (Palencia-Spain)

Bullet - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

If I could remember
what I am looking for
I would stop
to take a rest.

Topic(s) of this poem: suicide


Comments about Bullet by Luis Gil de la Puente

  • (10/25/2009 3:31:00 AM)

    If I could remember
    what I am looking for
    I would stop
    to take a rest.

    a fantastic bullet..small but have more effects and a long story is hidden inside..I like the way you write very perfectly.. meaningful, and interesting idea is there inside..symbolic and heartfelt cognitive approach..well done 10/10
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (9/10/2009 4:21:00 PM)

    yeap gRRRRRRRRReat short poem!
    10+
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  • (5/30/2009 5:12:00 PM)

    woooooooooooow, i dont know what to sy,
    i wish i could rest too
    great dear poet
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  • (4/22/2009 8:53:00 AM)

    interesting poem and very inquisitive..the poem is enticing..marvelous poem though..outstanding work! (Report)Reply

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  • Tom Balch (12/17/2008 6:20:00 PM)

    Great piece, I also have written one called Bullet,10 regards Tom (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (10/24/2008 6:19:00 AM)

    glad you don't remember! interesting read...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (2/11/2008 11:29:00 PM)

    Yes, this is good. If is such a powerful word. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/13/2007 2:24:00 PM)

    maybe you're unaware, that you may have placed it in your poem.

    Good read.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 26, 2015


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