Luis Gil de la Puente
Saturday, January 13, 2007


Rating: 5.0
If I could remember
what I am looking for
I would stop
to take a rest.
Luis Gil de la Puente
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
Afzal Shauq 25 October 2009
If I could remember what I am looking for I would stop to take a rest. a fantastic bullet..small but have more effects and a long story is hidden inside..I like the way you write very perfectly.. meaningful, and interesting idea is there inside..symbolic and heartfelt cognitive approach..well done 10/10
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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2009
yeap gRRRRRRRRReat short poem! 10+
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Noha El3wdy 30 May 2009
woooooooooooow, i dont know what to sy, i wish i could rest too great dear poet
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interesting poem and very inquisitive..the poem is enticing..marvelous poem though..outstanding work!
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Tom Balch 17 December 2008
Great piece, I also have written one called Bullet,10 regards Tom
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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008
glad you don't remember! interesting read...10
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Yes, this is good. If is such a powerful word.
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Ronald Stroman 13 January 2007
maybe you're unaware, that you may have placed it in your poem. Good read.
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