Bullet Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

Bullet

Rating: 5.0


If I could remember
what I am looking for
I would stop
to take a rest.

Saturday, January 13, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ronald Stroman 13 January 2007

maybe you're unaware, that you may have placed it in your poem. Good read.

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Yes, this is good. If is such a powerful word.

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008

glad you don't remember! interesting read...10

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Afzal Shauq 25 October 2009

If I could remember what I am looking for I would stop to take a rest. a fantastic bullet..small but have more effects and a long story is hidden inside..I like the way you write very perfectly.. meaningful, and interesting idea is there inside..symbolic and heartfelt cognitive approach..well done 10/10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 September 2009

yeap gRRRRRRRRReat short poem! 10+

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Noha El3wdy 30 May 2009

woooooooooooow, i dont know what to sy, i wish i could rest too great dear poet

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

interesting poem and very inquisitive..the poem is enticing..marvelous poem though..outstanding work!

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Tom Balch 17 December 2008

Great piece, I also have written one called Bullet,10 regards Tom

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