Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente (Palencia-Spain)

Poems by Luis Gil de la Puente : 65 / 84

Bullet - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

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If I could remember
what I am looking for
I would stop
to take a rest.

Topic(s) of this poem: suicide

Poems by Luis Gil de la Puente : 65 / 84

Afzal Shauq (10/25/2009 3:31:00 AM)
If I could remember
what I am looking for
I would stop
to take a rest.

a fantastic bullet..small but have more effects and a long story is hidden inside..I like the way you write very perfectly.. meaningful, and interesting idea is there inside..symbolic and heartfelt cognitive approach..well done 10/10 (Report)Reply
Sarwar Chowdhury (9/10/2009 4:21:00 PM)
yeap gRRRRRRRRReat short poem!
10+ (Report)Reply
Noha El3wdy (5/30/2009 5:12:00 PM)
woooooooooooow, i dont know what to sy,
i wish i could rest too
great dear poet (Report)Reply
Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/22/2009 8:53:00 AM)
interesting poem and very inquisitive..the poem is enticing..marvelous poem though..outstanding work! (Report)Reply
Tom Balch (12/17/2008 6:20:00 PM)
Great piece, I also have written one called Bullet,10 regards Tom (Report)Reply
Kesav Easwaran (10/24/2008 6:19:00 AM)
glad you don't remember! interesting read...10 (Report)Reply
Lime and Tequila with a Splash of Pineapple (2/11/2008 11:29:00 PM)
Yes, this is good. If is such a powerful word. (Report)Reply
Ronald Stroman (1/13/2007 2:24:00 PM)
maybe you're unaware, that you may have placed it in your poem.

Good read. (Report)Reply