Bullet

If I could remember what I am looking for I would stop to take a rest. a fantastic bullet..small but have more effects and a long story is hidden inside..I like the way you write very perfectly.. meaningful, and interesting idea is there inside..symbolic and heartfelt cognitive approach..well done 10/10

yeap gRRRRRRRRReat short poem! 10+

woooooooooooow, i dont know what to sy, i wish i could rest too great dear poet

interesting poem and very inquisitive..the poem is enticing..marvelous poem though..outstanding work!

Great piece, I also have written one called Bullet,10 regards Tom

glad you don't remember! interesting read...10

Yes, this is good. If is such a powerful word.

maybe you're unaware, that you may have placed it in your poem. Good read.