Busy Doing Nothing! Poem by suzan gumush

Busy Doing Nothing!

Rating: 4.5


Everyone's busy!
Busy! busy! buz! buz! busy!
Doing nothing!
Busy! buz! busy! busy! buz! buz!
Doing nothing!
Buz! buz! buz! busy! buz!
Doing nothing!
Busy! buz! busy! buz! buz! busy! buz!
Doing nothing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathaniel Booker 05 September 2008

The emphasis on the buzzing makes the doing nothing more profound, I like this poem, I think it is really light and interesting. Be Well

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xxxxx xxxx 30 July 2008

an interesting poem but meaningfull

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Robert Howard 10 February 2008

A zingy fun poem. Its sound reminds me of a mosquito out on exercises when you are trying to get to sleep. Out of respect for you and your talent I resist the temptation to swat.

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Broken Peaces 29 January 2008

Yes Susan doing nothing and half the time achieving nothing, the only question is busy doing nothing why do we end up being so tired 10 I am going to have a sit down I'M SHATTERED Chris x

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Ernestine Northover 27 January 2008

This reminds me of a song, 'I'm busy doing nothing, working the whole day through, trying to find lots of things not to do, I'm busy going nowhere, isn't it just a crime, I aught to be unhappy but, I really don't have the time'. Sometimes one feels that one has been so busy and yet one has achieved absolutely nothing. Enjoyed this write, now I shall buz off and get busy! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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