But A Candle Poem by Jim Yerman

But A Candle

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What if we are but a candle...lit the moment of our birth
Meant to flicker softly...and shine our light upon the earth?

And what if our lone candle...on the moment that we die...
Continues to twinkle softly...as a star up in the sky?

Monday, August 1, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Randhir Kaur 01 August 2016

WAOOO...that last couplet....so so..dmn touching...really a provoking line...we can shine..yes... Interesting poem....

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