Death came earlier than expected...
we begged...
we pleaded...
we prayed
But death ignored all our requests...
for that often is death's way.
And just as often we were not ready
we could not justify...
we were confused...
we were sad...
we were angry
and it hurt to say goodbye.
But once we finished grieving
happiness revived
For although we lost a person we love
Our memories survived.
Which means as long as we remember...
that person remains near-by...
and every time we think of them...
we don't have to say goodbye.
I am so touched by your poem, and feel comforted. I lost three friends this year and I really miss them You are right, as long as we have memories we don't have to say goodbye.
Life and death are part of life.We have to accept death as the hard truth.Yes, a person lives through the memories of near and dear ones.A nice piece of writing.Congratulations for Poem of the Day.
People die in God's Time, I reckon. Most adorable poem about death. So true is your poem about Death and indeed our memories survived. Aptly worded.5 Stars full. Beautifully worded.
A good one, This is really the best anti death poem Great poem esteem poet
Indeed, thanks for writing about death in such a comfortably poetic ease. Cheers.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very nice poem, Jim. I can relate, as I lost my mother at an early age. This is very comforting. Congratulations for having it selected as poem of the day!