But I Miss You Most When You Don’t Miss Me….
When the sky becomes crimson red
I miss u
when the apple turns red from green in Kashmir
I miss u
When the boughs of olive tree are full of leaves
I miss u
When frosty winter blocks the door
I miss u
When the mailbox is filled with letters from others
I miss u
When I am at mess and dont find what to write
I miss u
But I miss u most
WHEN U DONT MISS ME....
wah! wah! wah? but how do you know? that you miss her most when she doesn't miss you? I think she also misses you most and that's the reason you also miss her most... You know! It's 'TELEPATHY' :)
Originates from deep emotion but the poem has a down to earth approach also. Conditions stated when the beloved is missed are very appropriate.Nice poem, thanks for sharing.
When the mailbox is filled with letters from others I miss u So nice, , , , , , it's absolutely right
wow! i miss u the most when others are around n not u.....a very sweet n emotional one...
When I am at mess and dont find what to write I miss u.................................................................. leaves yet miss the tree as green leaves the leaf love misses grin as grin loves in resilience, amazing write by imagery, yet of unique genre, i do enjoy,10+++, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wowwwww A superb write! ! ! ! You, miss her most I guess when the mailbox boasts with letters of posts from others And not herssssss -10 anjali