Caitlyn Poem by Black Rose

Caitlyn



Hello Caitlyn
You're only two
You barely know me
But I really love you

I never had someone
To care about before
Then you came along
And melted my heart

If you read this poem
I hope you don't laugh
And sorry it doesn't rhyme
It wasn't supposed to

It's actually really a bad poem
But this is how i express myself
You are one of the few things in my life
That give me

Hope
Joy
Love
Hapiness

You keep smiling little one
Keep laughing and playing and having fun
You don't know how long you'll be happy
So treasure every moment you are

I'll be here for you as an aunty
Or a sister
Or a friend
Just let me know

Okay Caitlyn
This poem is for you
Hope you like it
Although it sucks

I wanna let you know
You are the one
Who taught me how to
Love again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabrina Rice 29 July 2009

The point of a poem isnt about rhyme and rythem, its about an expession of emotion, getting an idea across, making an impact, healing a heart ect. and those things you do sooo well. Don't be down on yourself. There are already enough people in the world who work at criticizing the arts, don't be one of them. :) I understand what you are talking about when you speak of this precious little girl. They are so young and innocent in this cruel world, breath in the fresh air they exert anytime you get a chance. Don't know you but love you, Sabrina Rice

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Heather Hill 08 July 2009

this one is really good i understand i work with kids and they are amazing...it makes u feel so warm inside because they love u just as u are good job

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Omar Ibrahim 07 July 2009

why do you say your poems aren't good? ? ? it's fantastic and had an idea...and you could express it..good one! !

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Omar Ibrahim 07 July 2009

why do you say your poems aren't good? ? ? it's fantastic and had an idea...and you could express it..good one! !

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Milica Franchi De Luri 06 July 2009

This poem is not bad. I liked it very much, it speaks the truth and is well put together and it does not have to rhyme. Good job.......

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