# Calm Surrender-Haiku Poem by Mamta Agarwal

# Calm Surrender-Haiku

Rating: 2.7


Watching the boats
as the wind changes course,
sails smoothly adjust...

Tuesday, November 25, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 04 June 2009

Nice cool 10+++

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Sadiqullah Khan 07 December 2008

Lovely, , i can see it, , why we ignore such serenity and always 'search' for troubles around us which ultimately disturb our lives, , ,10

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premji premji 25 November 2008

persistance of vision.... the boat is stagnant in my mind 10+

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Ency Bearis 25 November 2008

a nice tranquil sea..great imagery write.. Ency Bearis

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