Mamta Agarwal

Rookie - 0 Points (March 27,1951 / India)

# Beware, I Am On My Way - Poem by Mamta Agarwal

Morning rays
Light up the brilliance
of diamond jewels,
As it moves, draped
in diaphnous robes.

Curvaceous, heaving
Its bosom like a siren,

A wanton woman,
Trying to ensnare
A gullible victim,
Paying standing ovation,
With longing in his limpid eyes,

Watching from the sidelines.
Comely, willowy
Gracefully undulating,
Today rain or shine

It flows,
With determination
Enjoying the journey;
On its destination
To merge its identity
With the one
who has waited
an eternity;
the mighty ocean.


Comments about # Beware, I Am On My Way by Mamta Agarwal

  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (10/17/2008 9:07:00 PM)

    A journey, towards destination, on the way... with diverse...
    A beautiful poem.10 for it.
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Sathyanarayana M V SSathyanarayana M V S (10/14/2008 11:14:00 AM)

    So many vivid pictures.....well penned. Could have avoided redundancy of 'lust' and 'desire'...........10 (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (10/14/2008 7:38:00 AM)

    a good imagery using the glittering river and ocean...tantalising womanhood in ultimate 'confluence' with manhood...good imaginative write, enigmatic though 10 (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Vidyadhar DurgekarVidyadhar Durgekar (10/11/2008 10:50:00 PM)

    Difficult one.........Very deep and meaningful (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (10/11/2008 5:12:00 AM)

    Enjoying the journey
    On its destination
    To merge its identity

    eloquence flows by the sway
    swanky swing swaddles in its own way
    journey seems to slake the desire
    blue sea raves up by the redemption.............exqusite exposition of grace by lucid flow, yetb it glows ingenious by the imagery, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing.
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Raj Nandy (10/10/2008 12:19:00 AM)

    There is music, rhythm, color and paint in this poetic composition!
    Why not try also short stories to unburden your poetic vision? ! 10/10
    -Raj Nandy
    (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Sarwar ChowdhurySarwar Chowdhury (10/8/2008 1:30:00 PM)

    New ammmmazing taste have got from this one. chosen words are fine! ........10+ (Report)Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 7 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 22, 2009


[Report Error]