Can We Shake Ourselves Awake Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Can We Shake Ourselves Awake



Can we shake ourselves awake,
From an aborted ride into darkness
Derailed?
Can we take back the hope to love,
And detour this scene to find happiness waiting?
Will agitated aggressiveness become offended
To find clearing eyes on the road...
And not on drugged realities sold as we slept!

Can we shake ourselves awake...
And turnaround to mend shattered daydreams,
Left unnourished and discouraged to fulfill?
Dropping them as excessive weight,
We believed our journey could not take...
But now needs!

If we can shake ourselves awake,
And break free of the mistaken purpose to control.
Focusing on the road we have taken to make peace.
The peace we nearly overslept
To let someone we felt we knew take the wheel.
Awakening to find they had become misguided!
Hopefully this does not delay our arrival.

If we can shake ourselves awake...
We just might make it there on time,
To celebrate!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tahnee ? ? ? 22 November 2006

To let someone we felt we knew take the wheel. Awakening to find they had become misguided! awesome poem, and awesome line.

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David Gerardino 21 November 2006

drugged realities sold as we slept, great line, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , one of your best...10

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