Candy Man Poem by Susan Lacovara

Candy Man

Rating: 5.0


You gave me love
Like a licorice twist
Tasty at first
Then pulled apart

Ice cream cone kindness
That could not withstand the heat
And melted

Cotton candy promises
Sugary with no real substance
Powdered donuts
The hole so wide

You offered popcorn counterpoint conversations
Small seeds sizzling that, then, to burst
Taffy puled in all directions
An All Day Sucker

I thought it best to take your sour lemons
And set up my roadside Lemonade Stand
At least then, I could reap some small profit
For the time spent working on loving you

Wednesday, May 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: breaking up
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(05/31/17) Sweet then soured, the ingredients of an ending....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 31 May 2017

Candy man... Any thing made of sugar can rot your teeth or heart! It sweet to taste but be careful Susan... Sweet is a trap so candy people :) hahaaa...

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