Canvass-3(Azure) -Revised- Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

Canvass-3(Azure) -Revised-

Rating: 5.0


CANVASS—3(azure) -revised

(Dedicated to Madam Marie Shine a great soul and Irish poet)


my sky is azure today

like the London sky

over the Thames

like the Calcutta sky

in the winter evening

with smog

like the Delhi sky

overcast with fog

in the early hours of the day

still the sun removes

the veil from her face



a gloom like an Albatross

hangs

over my shoulder

behind the window-grills

I feel as if a jail-bird

who will remove this guilt

from my mind

since you have left

with an unspoken word



with the rise of sun

the sky gets clear of fogs

the smog

gets clear by rains

will the guilt be

washed away with tears?

unless you forgive me

forever...
.

Rajkumar@Kolkata
22-05-2009
Rajkumar Mukherjee

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a touching poem for a leaving good soul left a trace in the mind and the heart of your fellow poets..deeply from the heart..10++++

0 0 Reply
Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

'will the guilt be washed away with tears? unless you forgive me forever...' yeah a very touching and moving piece well i wish too that some person will forgive me before i get washed away in tears...nice 10++

0 0 Reply
C. P. Sharma 30 May 2009

Shades of industrialization playing with Nature. CP

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success