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Heathen

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HEATHEN

the footprints of Goddess Lakshmi
are hanging before you
like the shadows ahead of light
like the ideas ahead of words

since childhood I have earned kudos
for being a 'good boy' too

yet this age this time
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Anjali Sinha 11 June 2009

yeh Lakshmi is naughty she runs where the rich are and never to the poor specially standing lakshmi therefore I llike the padam one cos shes more stable wowwwwwwwwwww lovely write dear Raj A++++and 10+++ anjali

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 May 2009

Laxmi chanchal hoti hein...............Laxmi is Restless...................Good Write................May be she too likes bad boys

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rago rago 28 April 2009

always blessed are those live happily. ups and downs are life a part and parcel. A good write.

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rago rago 28 April 2009

always blessed are those live happily. ups and downs are life a part and parcel. A good write.

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Vaibhav Pandey 21 April 2009

i agree with indira ma'm comment......thoughtful piece....10

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Chitra - 09 April 2009

universal in tone...ups and downs are a part of life but also the higher spirit is a part of life..all we need to do is seek within

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Indira Babbellapati 04 April 2009

there comes a stage in every life when one feels abandoned even by gods....but it's only a passing phase!

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Cynthia renee 26 March 2009

i like the way this sounds but i'm not so sure i understand......i enjoy the way you write and the way you use words its like a river in motion so fluid and smoothe

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 March 2009

The success brings servitude because people always expect you to succeed.......... Success is indeed golden fetter........ Good Write......

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