HEATHEN
the footprints of Goddess Lakshmi
are hanging before you
like the shadows ahead of light
like the ideas ahead of words
since childhood I have earned kudos
for being a 'good boy' too
yet this age this time
appears to me to be without
the blessings of the Goddess
Rajkumar-Mumbai
i like the way this sounds but i'm not so sure i understand......i enjoy the way you write and the way you use words its like a river in motion so fluid and smoothe
there comes a stage in every life when one feels abandoned even by gods....but it's only a passing phase!
universal in tone...ups and downs are a part of life but also the higher spirit is a part of life..all we need to do is seek within
yeh Lakshmi is naughty she runs where the rich are and never to the poor specially standing lakshmi therefore I llike the padam one cos shes more stable wowwwwwwwwwww lovely write dear Raj A++++and 10+++ anjali
Laxmi chanchal hoti hein...............Laxmi is Restless...................Good Write................May be she too likes bad boys
always blessed are those live happily. ups and downs are life a part and parcel. A good write.
always blessed are those live happily. ups and downs are life a part and parcel. A good write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The success brings servitude because people always expect you to succeed.......... Success is indeed golden fetter........ Good Write......