First Love Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

First Love

Rating: 5.0


FIRST LOVE
we fought for a sip of water

from the fairest of hands

I saw till that date in Sonemarg


it was an autumn afternoon

sky was illuminated with the setting sun

your face was glowing like a red apple

and we became really thirsty

when I was drinking the water

my friend tried to snap a picture

but you fled like a doe covering your face

with a muslin dopatta revealing your sharp looks

that convey love anguish and betrayal at the same time

which can kill any soul on Earth


was that my first love which still haunts me

in my dreams in my lone moments

Rajkumar-Mumbai

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roshni D'Souza 22 March 2009

You have captured a beautiful moment in time and that too, so well. Thanks!

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Catrina Heart 22 March 2009

First love never dies they say even you have separate ways.......lovely creation, well said...10

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Anjali Sinha 24 March 2009

yes first love sometimes is the last love lovely write dear Raj Kumar -10 anjali (do read mine THE SUN)

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Pablo Cruise 05 April 2009

Lovely sentiments, Rajkumar...............

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Deepti Agarwal 31 March 2009

....sweet.... First Love always remain alive in our heart..

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Indira Babbellapati 25 March 2009

very delicately and fondly expressed...

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 24 March 2009

First love or infatuation whatever you call it always leaves imprint in deep part of brain and inner most core of heart.It always haunts you in lone moments.We can also call it unrequited love........10+++++....

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Anjali Sinha 24 March 2009

yes first love sometimes is the last love lovely write dear Raj Kumar -10 anjali (do read mine THE SUN)

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