Droplets-1 Poem by Rajkumar Mukherjee

Droplets-1

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RAKHI

the threads of bondage

the colours of love

the pearls of feelings

will keep you tied

forever with your roots

Rajkumr@Kolkata04-08-2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

loves all..poemsfilled with beauty and wisdom, excellent writting when the rain stops, smell of earth and flowers fill up the air; when stops the song we carry the tune along

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 26 April 2009

no lights can enlighten the lives of the down-trodden...........beautiful lines.......so true...........

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Naidz Ladia 28 April 2009

'the pearls of feelings will keep you tied forever with your roots'..i quote these lines coz these i like most..forever with roots, means it is always alive...and pearls are precious gems, so by just these lines, the poem is great.. naizz

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Eyan Desir 28 April 2009

HA Good write Dear poet

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 May 2009

Yes it will Sir till sonoral and fraternal relationships sustain all odds of life.

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Mamta Agarwal 06 May 2009

very beautiful and delicate, the bond of relationships- lovely expression 10 Mamta

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Catrina Heart 05 May 2009

A solon of poetry..........beautiful composition here!

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a very true words..expressed with wisdom..

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the colour brigs out not the relation but the joy in that relation

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Kesav Easwaran 04 May 2009

you give a good definition for Rakhi there...meaningful bonding...nice...thanks

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