Friday, January 1, 2016

Captive! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am frazzled, Completely entranced,
My heart bleeds in search of my beloved,
My agonizing cries envelope this universe.
Afflicted, I beseech my existence.
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 January 2022

Superb! I can't go beyond the precise comment of the below esteemed poetess. Top score.

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Valsa George 14 February 2016

The intense longing of a lover for that moment of a reunion when love will be merged with love! There is a sweeping force of feelings in these lines!

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Abhilasha Bhatt 03 January 2016

A good poetry on love..thanx for sharing :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 January 2016

Oh sweet love! ! My heart bleeds in search of my beloved. Great work!

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 January 2016

Thanks Edward.

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2016

Wonderful poem on love, I liked it Intoxicated by the thoughts of our reunion, My soul burning to attain the salvation, For that one glimpse of my beloved, I shatter my existence to be loved.

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Aarzoo Mehek 03 January 2016

Glad you liked this poem. Thanks for appreciating my little work.

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