I've been to the place where the women are perfect
But no one will give you the time
When you get to the point where you're deeply in love
Life can lose reason or rhyme
Carmenita was loving a man twice her age
And this wouldn't be half bad
But the man that she loved wasn't any old man
The man was whom she called her dad
I witnessed it first when he kissed her hello
And again when he kissed her goodbye
The way that they touched made me turn away
My heart felt great pain that day
Falling in love is traumatic at best
An ordeal we don't readily choose
Because love is a battle that some will win
And some will have to lose
Carmenita was deeply in love with her dad
When i knew just why i was deeply sad
Im not just creating a story it seems
She shared with me nightmares
They weren't just dreams
I feel for Carmenita and her blue silk purse
A love so deep and unresolved within her life's curse
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
touching.... shared a lot of thoughts..provoking.. the theme is telling us a story to think twice.. its interesting to read... 10+++ lovelots, Maia