Carnal Vs. Spirit Poem by Stephanie Hazle

Carnal Vs. Spirit

Rating: 5.0


Carnal:

Tell me, how do I stay pure
With a mind so unclean
A body with hormones that scream
With a heart that belongs to You
Yet willing to give in
Towards a natural inclination
To this thing called sin?
I want to be pleased and please
Express how I feel with ease
Without this weight of knowing
That the direction I'm going
Takes me further away from You
I see the caution signs
Amber lights glare at me
But I proceed without steering
Away from the danger that waits
Not caring enough about where my actions will lead.

Spirit:

Before I hit the crater ahead,
Before I fall in an everlasting hole
A voice resonates inside my soul
I realise my will only takes me too far
Further than I could ever want to go
And before I get there, where I will feel abandoned and alone
Grace reminds me who I am, and more important
Who He is.
I will reap the fruits of my purity
I will stay true to the one I serve
How will I do this one may ask?
Simply through faith
My own strength fails me
So with a mind that's renewed
And a body that's Your temple
With a heart that still belongs to You
That won't be willing to give in
Towards a natural inclination
To this thing called sin,
I win.

Sunday, February 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: holy spirit,power,sin,temptation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 31 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Hazle. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Ovi Odiete 21 October 2016

You are blessed oh thou Poetess! ! !

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A sweet spiritual song of success that sails.above the struggles of sin..As refreshing as river that runs from the rain!

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Stephanie Hazle 25 July 2016

So it is when our thirst is quenched by Living Water! Thank you Howard :)

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Chinedu Dike 11 July 2016

An insightful depiction of the irrepressible conflict between mundane carnal feelings and spirituality. To uphold and support one, is to jettison and overthrow the other. Thanks for sharing Stephanie.

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Stephanie Hazle 25 July 2016

Perfectly summarized Chinedu. Thank you.

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Mike Smith 21 February 2016

The struggle between our desires and our morals is a real one. You've expressed it very nicely here. Well done

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