Cast Poem by M.J. Lemon

Cast

Rating: 5.0


Thrown away
Because
It is not
the after dinner
Theatre troupe that
Holds
Your funny bone
in place

Friday, September 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: grook,humour,success
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Because every theatre has a cast, I suppose it is appropriate to wish Break a Leg! ? For KH and TR- the auditions are just days away...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 03 June 2019

You have created a web of meaning around the word 'cast'. Cast is the players in a drama or troupe. Cast also refers to the plaster wound around a broken bone. Now since you are healed, you no more need the cast to hold your 'funny bone'. So you have 'cast away' the 'cast' you had earlier! Great!

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Mj Lemon 05 June 2019

Thank you, Valsa. I remember as I wrote this, I was thinking about what idea might cover tragedy and comedy, or the journey from one to the other. Thanks again,

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 June 2018

Astutely inscribed. Beautiful poem with humour. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mj Lemon 11 June 2018

And thank you, Kumarmani.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 March 2018

A new way of looking at things, the multifaceted way the word cast can be used, of acceptance and being rejected. Nicely written.

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Mj Lemon 25 March 2018

Much appreciated, Subhas. Thanks so much.

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Simone Inez Harriman 15 August 2017

A great play on words. I read this little poem over and over to find new meaning to the discarded cast and what holds your funny bone in place.

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Mj Lemon 16 August 2017

Thank you so much, Simone. I think the funny bone should, at least at times, be stressed.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 January 2017

Cast out the pain and suffering Second City in offering

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Mj Lemon 19 January 2017

Second City....that is perfect, Richard.

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