High pollution
Kids wheeze and city coughs-
Mind full of smog
tying the mind to the lungs to the kids...the lifesources of the human world. very nice.
SMOG is an engineering term which we use frequently in Automobile Engg. (smoke+ fog) ... lovely haiku and i appreciate your concern for young lungs and nature. oil is the blood of earth and we have already punctured her heart! her lungs: the amazon forest is almost felled down... gone...sure nature will fight back with epidemics, natural calamities.. 10+++
M-ainly though provoking a profound observation m-any did not mind t-hat there is death in the air a-t everywhere! a 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Pollution's effect on nostrils and lungs is apparent but it's effect on human mind is occult and very harmful and so on heart as well...!