You see me only in the makeups,
Star among stars designed for the shakeups,
See me when I am sleepless
With the moon, sharing loneliness,
Sun goes to bed early, early wakeups!
Loneliness is perhaps the greatest problem of our times. A wonderful poem Jawad sahab. We all have nights when we are staring at the night sky contemplating about the life we lead. Thanks for sharing.
A fascinating poem that echoes loneliness. A short write with great impact.10++++
O look the darkness compress me roundly. the cloudy night makes slightly cool. the moon is peeping as one-eyed man no zephyr in my living gyre- in this bank I'm aloof pile of life all green and sunbeam are there in your lap of quiet light
and I must remind you why i said I don't want to be a celebrity as I hate being lonely now adays those guys want more publicity want to show their kids in bikinis and say she is mine okay ours mainly hope you still know me her papa not now lonely as you recognize me but naturally hopefully as I am the world 's sole celebrity even the sun bows as i sleep...waiting behind veiled windows for me
all know u sleep early where as here sunsets at 9 PM really and you wake up early we continue to sleep sun doesn't rise as it snows mostly northern hemisphere when its winters
We see them sharing loneliness with moon and this amazes mind entirely. Stars dazzle in sky without make up but human beings try to shine using makeup. An amazing poem is wisely penned...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Loneliness but also an allegory for shallowness. What is truly 'important'?