Chain Verse ~ A Departure Note Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Chain Verse ~ A Departure Note

Rating: 4.9


Tomorrow I shall roam free,
Free from the burden of this body,
Body that captivated me for long,
Long enough to keep me alive.

Now I shall be free from any accountability,
Accountability that kept me in check,
Check that I am still alive and living,
Living a life which is predestined,
Destined to certain path and ways.

Tomorrow when the soul will see the light,
Light of the day from the darkness of this body,
Body which is mortal, but bundled in ego,
Ego, a burden that forced mind to enjoy.

Enjoy the dust with which I am made of and
And I shall roam free till eternity for ever and ever.

Tuesday, February 1, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: departure,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shreya Hacks 02 February 2022

Gem of a poem, Adorable 5 Stars

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Shreya Hacks 02 February 2022

Freedom from self is supreme and this poem takes us to the extreme of the freedom.

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Indira Renganathan 10 February 2022

'Enjoy the dust with which I am made of and And I shall roam free till eternity for ever and ever.'...a great thought nicely crafted....top score

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Bharati Nayak 03 February 2022

Enjoy the dust with which I am made of and And I shall roam free till eternity for ever and ever.----A wonderful poem!

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Zumas Millamo 02 February 2022

Interesting poem in nice format.

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Mamta S 02 February 2022

Lovely poem. Tomorrow when the soul will see the light, Light of the day from the darkness of this body, Body which is mortal, but bundled in ego, Ego, a burden that forced mind to enjoy.

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Gordon Walter 02 February 2022

Marvellous poem. Very well written. The unbroken chain speaks volume about the philosophy of this life.

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