Charcoal Shadows Poem by Sandra Fowler

Charcoal Shadows

Rating: 4.9


Gray drops paint charcoal shadows on the skin.
They wear the windowpanes of old souls thin.
Hold out your hand against the falling light.
Believe with me that rain is infinite.

The mood is fragile as a curtain lace,
Such filigree no weather could replace.
Your fingers brush a brief tear from my eye.
Such tenderness deserves a warm reply.

Copyright,2009, Sandra Fowler

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 28 June 2009

Gray drops paint charcoal shadows on the skin ...............Good line and excellent poem Madam Enjoyed reading it

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Vinod Kumar 28 June 2009

Cute piece really honoured, thanks,10++

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Smiley Hooker 28 June 2009

a tender, touching poem! well done! : -)

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Anjali Sinha 26 June 2009

sadness, love and tenderness nicely etched with those characoal shadows on your canvas -10 anjali

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Obinna Eruchie 25 June 2009

A wonderful, tender poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 05 November 2022

Sandra, it's an outstanding poem. I love this poem. Top score.

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Indira Babbellapati 27 September 2009

the second stanza choked me...

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Alison Mary Dunn 12 July 2009

'Hold out your hand against the falling light. Believe with me that rain is infinite'. I felt only to repeat these wonderful lines x

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Chitra - 30 June 2009

the warm effusing touch cannot be compensated by any other materialistic riches... a wonderful write!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 29 June 2009

A good mingling of rain with the mood of humankind with rain signifying its both facets one being the joy and the other in the form of tears when one is in deep melancholy. A beautiful symbolic poem reflecting the flow of warmth of love and sadness ingrained in the charcoal shadows. Best Regards Naseer

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Sandra Fowler

Sandra Fowler

W. Columbia, WV, USA
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