Senche jo apna gulshan e atfal chhod kar.
Khush khush wo chal diey hamen har sal chhod kar.
Phoolon ki pattiyon ko sanwara he umr bhar.
Aandhi men ham ne apne par o bal chhod kar.
Bulbul ka hal dekhiey karta he tarbiyat.
Bijli ki zad pe apne wo amwal chhod kar.
Apna lahoo diya he to puhnche hen kuch darakht.
Owj e falak pe pasti e patal chhod kar.
Kitne hi imtehan hon kitni hi zimniyan.
Jana he har school ko har hal chhod kar.
Jazib ko bux dejiey ya rab bila hisab.
Is be nawa ka nama e aamal chhod kar.
I always love to read Urdu Ghazal. Melodious! Soothing to heart. Please read poem Badder ala Shayar(ਬਾੱਡਰ ਆਲ਼ਾ ਸ਼ਾਯਰ)
Last lines made me smile and I said to myself arey way mujhe bhi ya Rab beghair sawaal jawab Ke kaash. Zabardast shairi wah, I liked ESP bulbul line as well. Pls pleez do comment/ review my newest poem too titled, " The Hajj pilgrimage "
Dear poetess! I am astonished to see Urdu words in your lovely comments. Thanks for it and your invitation as well.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Phoolon ki pattiyon ko sanwara he umr bhar. Aandhi men ham ne apne par o bal chhod kar. Bulbul ka hal dekhiey karta he tarbiyat. Bijli ki zad pe apne wo amwal chhod kar. Lajawab ghazal. Ye do sher bohot umda hai. Dheron daad..
Dear Arzoo Mehek! Apke alfaaz ka shukria.