Phenomenal Man Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

Phenomenal Man

Rating: 4.5

He has a broad heart.

Possessing four chambers.

The chambers of love.

Accomodating each.

A phenomenal gal.

He may be monogamous.

Upto a tetragamous.

The nymphs are peeping.

Repeeping through the heavens.

Complaining to the God.

That he is less communal.

The angels are saying.

That he is broad minded.

He never loses temper.

He never loses heart.

He never loses hope.

He never loses art.

He never wastes letters.

He never wastes words.

He never wastes phrases.

And never a sentence.

He never wastes a moment.

And never an utterance.

Friday, April 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: hero,symbolic
Konab Ghumman 12 March 2019

He never wastes letters. He never wastes words. He never wastes phrases. What a beautiful creation!

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 March 2019

Thanks for your continuous support, Konab Ghumman.

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Binayakumar Mohanty 21 November 2018

He never losses heart He never losses art A phenomenal poem indeed Thanks for sharing

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2018

Thank you so much, Binayakumar, for your nice comment.

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Chris Embrick 13 March 2018

All noble attributes to attain. It is a difficult order to fill but we all must try. I think because each of us has flaws, life is more interesting. A great, thoughtful poem full of wisdom. The greatest attributes of life come from the heart.10+++

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Jazib Kamalvi 14 March 2018

I appreciate your nice words. Many thanks, Chris.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2017

Dear poet, you have sketched the portrait of a man who is phenomenally phenomenal! I found a poem in different gender in contrast to Maya's 'Phenomenal woman' in different tone in different taste! You have penned it very nicely dear poet! Thank you for sharing..10

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 December 2017

Thank you very much, Dr. Dillip, for your nice words.

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Nayyab Younas Khan 30 November 2017

No doubt about it God made man phenomenal.......May we use all our capabilites righteously......Thanks for this nice piece of poetry.

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Jazib Kamalvi 30 November 2017

So nice of you for the nicer feedback.

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