Jazib Kamalvi


Phenomenal Man - Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

He has a broad heart.

Possessing four chambers.

The chambers of love.

Accomodating each.

A phenomenal gal.

He may be monogamous.

Upto a tetragamous.

The nymphs are peeping.

Repeeping through the heavens.

Complaining to the God.

That he is less communal.

The angels are saying.

That he is broad minded.

He never loses temper.

He never loses heart.

He never loses hope.

He never loses art.

He never wastes letters.

He never wastes words.

He never wastes phrases.

And never a sentence.

He never wastes a moment.

And never an utterance.

Topic(s) of this poem: hero, symbolic

Form: Prose Poem


Comments about Phenomenal Man by Jazib Kamalvi

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/5/2017 10:09:00 AM)


    A real hero is he who...
    He never loses temper.

    He never loses heart.

    He never loses hope.

    He never loses art.

    He never wastes letters.

    He never wastes words.

    He never wastes phrases.

    And never a sentence.

    He never wastes a moment.

    And never an utterance.

    Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.
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    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (11/5/2017 7:35:00 PM)

    Thanks for this honour, Mahakul sir.

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  • Diane Montemayor (9/15/2017 6:32:00 AM)


    Dear Sir Jazib,

    Phenomenal Man- Real hero is measured by the strength of his heart....
    Loved it...

    Sincerely,
    diane
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    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (9/15/2017 12:01:00 PM)

    I appreciate your appreciation, Diane. Thanks

  • Robert Murray Smith (8/17/2017 4:17:00 PM)


    This poem is amazing.10

    Robert
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    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (8/17/2017 8:05:00 PM)

    Thank you very much, Robert.

  • Shimizu Mizuhala (6/30/2017 12:51:00 AM)


    A series of sentences, analysis of a class of people. I can not fully understand, but this poem is very powerful. Thank you. (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (6/30/2017 2:52:00 AM)

    So nice of you for so insightful comments

  • Unwritten Soul (6/15/2017 9:48:00 AM)


    A Phenomenal Man never do wrong but if he does, he learned and fix it greater, A Phenomenal Man is not rely on physical that is strong, but wisdom love patience faith in his four-chambered heart! (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (6/15/2017 3:29:00 PM)

    Thank you so much...

  • Chinedu Dike (6/13/2017 8:04:00 PM)


    Beautiful rhetorical poem, well articulated and nicely brought forth with insight. Sounds like the exact man. Thanks for sharing Jazib. (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (6/14/2017 8:54:00 AM)

    Grateful for your appreciation. Thanks

  • Rehnuma Tarannum (5/1/2017 5:21:00 AM)


    Thats very nice. true picture of a herat that never commits. keep up the good works. (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (5/1/2017 7:15:00 AM)

    Thank you for appreciation.

  • Akhtar Jawad (4/28/2017 10:48:00 AM)


    That's a true pen picture of an ideal man, a nice write. (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (4/28/2017 4:55:00 PM)

    I am really thankful.

  • Rameeza Nasim (4/26/2017 11:24:00 AM)


    Nicely written! Your poem reminds me of Iqbal words describing the attributes of Momin where Hoors were complaining of his less accessibility and angels praising that hes fanstastic
    farishtay kehtay hain k dil awaiz hai momin
    hooron ko shikayat hay k kum amaiz hai momin... something like that
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    Rameeza Nasim Rameeza Nasim (4/27/2017 5:32:00 AM)

    :) no need to thank keep sharing n inspiring us with your poems

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (4/26/2017 1:53:00 PM)

    I wanted that commet only. You are an intellectual poetess indeed. How could I thank you?

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (4/25/2017 10:09:00 PM)


    sublime, imaginative and elevating.. thank you dear poet. tony (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (4/25/2017 11:09:00 PM)

    I am grateful to you for such literary comments.

  • Bharati Nayak (4/25/2017 9:34:00 AM)


    Attributes of a real hero- - - - - -
    That he is less communal.

    The angels are saying.

    That he is broad minded.

    He never loses temper.

    He never loses heart.

    He never loses hope.

    He never loses art.

    He never wastes letters.

    He never wastes words.

    He never wastes phrases.

    And never a sentence.

    He never wastes a moment.

    And never an utterance.
    - - - - - - - - - - -A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.
    (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (4/25/2017 1:20:00 PM)

    Thanks for kind comments..

  • (4/22/2017 7:22:00 AM)


    I have never seen such impressive, effective, imaginative and sublime prose poem here. A great symbolic poetry. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Jazib Kamalvi Jazib Kamalvi (4/22/2017 8:34:00 AM)

    You possess an extreme penetrating eye at PH. I am grateful for such literary comments.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 21, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, April 21, 2017


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