Chipmunks Confusion Poem by Smoky Hoss

Chipmunks Confusion

Rating: 5.0


Chipmunk
Tail held high
Sprints across the street
On the fly -
To get to the other side
His only goal
There to dive
In another hole -
But wait,
Half way across
His small attention span
Gets lost -
The aroma of an acorn
Lingers upon the center line
With just one sweet sniff
He knows what he must find -
Turning
With the street
Several cars
He does meet -
Dodging them all
In and out
Strictly by chance
Blindly following his commanding snout -
Desire rules
Over fear for death's sake
Find the acorn
Whatever it takes -
At length
Circling full around
Back to where he started
In his own abode, under the ground -
Silly
He thinks to self,
That seductive sweet scent
Was the nut, here, on my own home shelf -
... So, back out
Once more he goes
Resuming his daily routine
Of crossing the road -

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
- Out for a stroll along a quiet street, a chipmunk
scurried across in front of me; I thought to myself: 'Why did the chipmunk cross the road? ' -
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 21 May 2012

Same reason as the chicken - to get to the other side! Seriously, this poem suggests that we expend a great deal of time and energy looking for the treasures we already possess if we did but realize. Good one.

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Heather Wilson 03 June 2012

A great write, Poor chipmunk never quite making it, I guess they were there before roads that are no use to them.

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Kevin Patrick 01 June 2012

I've always loved chipmunks and squirrels, there real underdogs for working class heros.

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Dave Walker 28 May 2012

A great poem, like it, my attention span is about the same, a great write.

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Captain Cur 23 May 2012

He crossed that road because we put it in his way. I call on all chipmunks to rebel and have their day! Nuts!

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Eric Cockrell 22 May 2012

sounds like the story of my life!

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