Of course it isn't a secret
That chocolate is the way
To send so many messages
You can change somebody's day
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Unwritten Soul, some people just enjoy giving poets a low score. I gues that's what makes THEM happy! Thanks for your comment. Thank you as well, Adeline! I will read your poem.
Yes a lovely poem and it described my daughters 'city park chocolate picnic' to a T. She had not been able to eat chocolate until she was 18, so I collected, as you said, a full table of every form of chocolate I could. A ready-made poem, lovely. Read mine - Mother Dear, Oh Mother Dear - Adeline
How come people rate it lower than what it deserves, i like this write and it is nice one Marilyn, keep writing..it can makes everyone happy in the spring flower field while enjoying this chocolate.. :) Keep doing more as u wanted_Unwritten Soul
A make me happy chocolate poem and who doesn't like to indulge and flowers has the powers to make us hug, great...regards
I really like this poem. It is simple and frivelous and fun. It makes you smile.
Don't we all just love chocolate, and flowers. Lovely poem.