Choices Poem by Aden Orie

Choices

Rating: 4.8


I was curious,
What it would be like?
To drink allot,
And I was psyched,
now I know,
That it’s not that great,
But now I crave,
A big mistake.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hana K 13 May 2008

hehe... here i come... nice poem, clear and simple

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Roger Bowman 08 May 2008

Simple clear and cool Aden R

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Annie Girl 08 May 2008

i can relate to it but any way nice poem. :)

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Geramie White 05 May 2008

Short, but a very good stament. I wouldn't be surprised if it was used for an anti-drug commercial.

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Monkey Mendez 05 May 2008

I've thought about going that way a few times, but I never actually did it. (I always wanted to black out) Nice work! C:

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meerkat 09 November 2021

]: (

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Amber S 08 October 2011

great poem very true but everyone makes mistakes. :) so your not alone.

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Royàlé Dì 08 October 2011

Alot said in few words..i lyk!

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Chatara Conway 23 April 2009

Choices are big in life and your poem shows that.

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Choices are the stuff of which life is made. Simple but substantive. Keep writing.

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