I was curious, What it would be like? To drink allot, And I was psyched, now I know, That it’s not that great, But now I crave, A big mistake.
great poem very true but everyone makes mistakes. :) so your not alone.
Alot said in few words..i lyk!
Choices are big in life and your poem shows that.
Choices are the stuff of which life is made. Simple but substantive. Keep writing.
beautiful, simple and deep write, i like it thanx for sharing 10
here i come...
nice poem, clear and simple
Simple clear and cool Aden
i can relate to it but any way nice poem. :)
Short, but a very good stament. I wouldn't be surprised if it was used for an anti-drug commercial.
I've thought about going that way a few times, but I never actually did it.
(I always wanted to black out)
Nice work! C:
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It's an amazing poem. It speaks so much through so little. I believe in constructive crittsicm, so I thought I'd just point out a couple of spelling mistakes if that's okay with you.
'i was curious,
of what it whould be like, '
'i was curious,
of what it would be like, ' (would is without an ‘h’)
“to drink alot,
and i was siked, '
'to drink alot,
and i was psyched, '
But other than that, it was great, really great.
Its said that - 'While we are free to choose our actions, we are not free to choose the consequences of our actions.”
Your poem is about the Choice and its Consequence.
Short and sweet.
All the best.
A excellent hakiu with a powerful thought
A realization on the right path-well said in brief.
this is so good i have never read such pain
i love it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem »