I need to reach your thinking wave universe
When love is a river and weaves through the verse.
We are man and woman made by God from clay.
Maybe this clay will be cosmic dust someday.
Maybe from the same sun cooling could be made
The planets Venus and Mars with their green jade.
I want to save this love from its growing shade,
A tall tree that by the karmic winds is swayed.
Your soul is a Norse verse composed by a Skald
Who keeps the sunlight in his heart emerald.
I hide the suffering between rain and tears
And the tender moments through the loving years.
Poem by Marieta Maglas
Will the comet fly through moons shadow will Venus carpet mars does mons play on the plateau..iip
I cant pick a favorite part, i love it all. It fed my romantic soul. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem and your talent with us. :)
both planet venus and your clean eyes, i love this line.a philosophical and a romantic poem.lovely write.thanks10.
'Because I know so well that from the same clay Our bodies and Galaxy have been made yesterday'... You nicely bring in philosophy into your good romantic poem Marieta..thanks...10
From: Dick Badian (Netherlands ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 11/2/2009 6: 52: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: forever yours hello Marietta. I promise i will get deeper in your work. I sniffed arround.saw some beautifull pieces.so as soon as i can find more time I will dive into your thoughts. kind regards stuiterdick
I conceal you in my soul as an ancient skald, As I hold back the moonlight in my emerald. And I feel your pain by touching your tear, When gentle I incline myself for loving you my dear.no it is not obsolete love but eternal and pure feeling... i may definitely succedd...lovely imagination and step in right direction....10 read mine she did not come...mry to marry.....miss i miss you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
From : kgnti dkritjgmdlo (west goshen wisconsin United States; Male; 43) To : Marieta Maglas Date Time : 8/6/2009 3: 16: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject : Great poem. Hello, I read your poem 'Obsolete Quiver Of The Universe'. I am really impressed with your talent and it is nice to see that modern-day women can still place the aspect and emotion of love in such high regard.Take care of yourself and farewell.