Cleopatra Poem by Marieta Maglas


Rating: 4.8

Under the mask of gold,
I see only venomous snakes
Poisoning her name forever.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Philip Winchester 03 October 2009

Many a true word spoken in but a small sentence. You have nailed it with this one, I sometimes take Five Hundred words to say as much, but can recognise your brevity as true CLASS. Well written and Thanks for your note. Kind Regards Philip

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Sathyanarayana M V S 22 October 2009

A cute analysis of Cleopatra, in few words.....great.

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Susan Russell 25 October 2009

great job! ! ! i loved that poem.... 10

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****Hanaring Tamara.. 26 October 2009

a historical beautiful poem..

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Alf Hutchison 29 October 2009

A great topic in so few words... brilliant Regards Alf

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 January 2010

i appreciate your view. kindly read my poem Cleopatra's glory. shan

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 07 January 2010

Yeah it’s true…but Beauty of Cleo…undoubtedly non venomous in eyes of beauty admirers … 10 not for venom…but for beauty of dear Cleo Ms. Nivedita UK

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Braja K Sarkar 29 December 2009

Really wonderful poem...I like this very much..

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Bob Genevro 08 December 2009

Hi Marieta, 'Cleopatra' works well as haiku. I like the gold and asp references because they are two images at opposite ends tugging with each other. Cleopatra still has that animal magnetism that attracts writers and readers. I'm wondering if you're going to keep playing and experimenting with haiku.

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Rahul Aithal 07 December 2009

Wow! short but killing.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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