Marieta Maglas

Gold Star - 6,350 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

Cleopatra - Poem by Marieta Maglas

Under the mask of gold,
I see only venomous snakes
Poisoning her name forever....

Topic(s) of this poem: snake

Comments about Cleopatra by Marieta Maglas

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/9/2010 8:08:00 AM)

    i appreciate your view. kindly read my poem Cleopatra's glory. shan (Report) Reply

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  • (1/7/2010 10:53:00 AM)

    Yeah it’s true…but Beauty of Cleo…undoubtedly non venomous in eyes of beauty admirers …
    10 not for venom…but for beauty of dear Cleo
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • (12/29/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    Really wonderful poem...I like this very much.. (Report) Reply

  • (12/8/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    Hi Marieta,
    'Cleopatra' works well as haiku. I like the gold and asp references because they are two images at opposite ends tugging with each other. Cleopatra still has that animal magnetism that attracts writers and readers. I'm wondering if you're going to keep playing and experimenting with haiku.
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  • (12/7/2009 10:44:00 AM)

    Wow! short but killing. (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    Hi Marieta,

    You started so well......too short, you could really make this great, remember how she was used by Ceaser, then cast aside by Mark Anthony.....the venomous snakes were the men in her have a good style but if you sit back and think of the great nation of Egypt and all the pressure on her, you could really make this a tragic poem, you have the skill to do it...why not? I only gave you a 4 this time.....but await you to resubmit or penn a new one? A challenge from me to you.......
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  • (11/10/2009 5:10:00 PM)

    hmmm, nice
    short but well said
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  • Ramin Chaman (11/7/2009 1:57:00 AM)

    a famous queen of Egypt

    Hello Mari

    a nice poem..and compact.. indeed a good write..

    for this 10+

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  • (10/30/2009 2:55:00 PM)

    A lifetime story of this beauty in a lifetime of tenacity (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    Very short poem, but totally accurate. love it (Report) Reply

  • (10/29/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    A great topic in so few words... brilliant Regards Alf (Report) Reply

  • (10/26/2009 10:27:00 AM)

    a historical beautiful poem.. (Report) Reply

  • (10/25/2009 12:17:00 PM)

    great job! ! ! i loved that poem....
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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (10/22/2009 10:07:00 PM)

    A cute analysis of Cleopatra, in few words.....great. (Report) Reply

  • (10/3/2009 4:51:00 AM)

    Many a true word spoken in but a small sentence.
    You have nailed it with this one, I sometimes take Five
    Hundred words to say as much, but can recognise your
    brevity as true CLASS.
    Well written and Thanks for your note.
    Kind Regards
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  • (10/2/2009 7:31:00 AM)

    An interesting write on have focussed on her tragic end...good job (Report) Reply

  • (9/30/2009 1:25:00 PM)

    Very short, but totally accurate. love it! .............. (Report) Reply

  • (9/27/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    this is the shortest poem i have ever sen. u are good. 7points (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2009 6:02:00 PM)

    a beautiful three liner for alady, larger than life, like cleopatra (Report) Reply

  • (9/26/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    great job! ! ! i loved that poem....keep writing! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 17, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 8, 2015

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