Clocks Poem by Evelyn Judy Buehler

Clocks

Rating: 5.0


Captivating ordinary lives with their hypnotic motions,
Leisurely moving on to eternity through cosmic oceans,
Oblivious colors go by, in the days and in rosy seasons,
Creamy moon and yellow sun, gives joy many reasons.
Kinetically charged, ancient time, with God on its side,
So silken and smooth flowing, like a molten gold slide.

Clocks
Saturday, July 30, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: name,clocks,eternity,seasons,life,god,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Photograph courtesy of PublicDomainPictures at Pixabay
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 01 August 2022

Intelligent piece of poetry! Keep it up!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 02 August 2022

Your words of encouragement and delight are appreciated.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 July 2022

A wonderfully creative and beautiful tribute to both, clocks and time. Flowing as smoothly and quickly, as time itself. The beautiful photograph is a nice touch.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 August 2022

Your appreciation is so rewarding. Thank you very much.

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Amber Piercy 31 July 2022

I love the way this moves together so fluidly. This is great work. Have an amazing day! ! ! !

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 August 2022

You have my very deep thanks for your inspiring words.

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Sandra Feldman 30 July 2022

The very artistic and intense poetic beauty of this poem, makes one glide thru time as if in a poetic time-dream, a new and great sensation, I ever really thought words could give, That is what unusual poetic genus is. And we have it here. To my poem list, for sure!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 August 2022

I am very happy that this poem affected you so. Thank you for your kind comments. I am honored to have a poem in your List.

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Sandra Feldman 30 July 2022

I like clocks. But never thought they could be so unforgettably meaningful and beautiful, till I read about them in this magnificent poem which is shear, delight!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 01 August 2022

Thank you so much for your heartwarming comments, which bring great joy.

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