Captivating ordinary lives with their hypnotic motions,
Leisurely moving on to eternity through cosmic oceans,
Oblivious colors go by, in the days and in rosy seasons,
Creamy moon and yellow sun, gives joy many reasons.
Kinetically charged, ancient time, with God on its side,
So silken and smooth flowing, like a molten gold slide.
A wonderfully creative and beautiful tribute to both, clocks and time. Flowing as smoothly and quickly, as time itself. The beautiful photograph is a nice touch.
I love the way this moves together so fluidly. This is great work. Have an amazing day! ! ! !
The very artistic and intense poetic beauty of this poem, makes one glide thru time as if in a poetic time-dream, a new and great sensation, I ever really thought words could give, That is what unusual poetic genus is. And we have it here. To my poem list, for sure!
I am very happy that this poem affected you so. Thank you for your kind comments. I am honored to have a poem in your List.
I like clocks. But never thought they could be so unforgettably meaningful and beautiful, till I read about them in this magnificent poem which is shear, delight!
Thank you so much for your heartwarming comments, which bring great joy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Intelligent piece of poetry! Keep it up!
Your words of encouragement and delight are appreciated.