gold pink orange dawn
rise up refreshed in sunshine
like a fragrant bloom
in torrid noon hour
emerald green and jaded
birds sing to summer
reds mauves turn dusky
shadows lengthen into night
glimmering moonbeams
midnight of dreaming
diamond stars are twinkling fire
music in the night
Brilliant presentation of the magnificent colors of day and night. Beautifully crafted and depicted. Your imagery made me at close range with the marvelous colors! ! ! Five Stars!
Thank you so much for the fine words of appreciation and the rating.
A beautiful poem with an apt title, describing a full day and night clockwise. Loved some of the lines, like: 'Gold pink orange dawn rise up refreshed in sunshine'..... 'birds sing to summer'..... 'shadows lengthen into night'.... 'diamond stars are twinkling fire'.
I love imagery-it allows you to express so many things, and gives liveliness to the scenes described. I'm glad this verse resonated with you. Thank you for your kind words.
Indeed this is clockwise always never making mistakes. Thank-you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Any time of day is transformed to a fabulous poem by your pen Evelyn!
Each phase of the day has its own special charm. Thank you very much.