Close Enough To Still Feel The Pain Poem by Ella Rose

Close Enough To Still Feel The Pain

Rating: 5.0

I sat down... down... down...
falling into retributions of lost souls with
heavy hearts.

I stood up... up... up...
standing high enough to see the pain
crowding over the decades
of intermediate relations.

I fell down... down.. down...
deep enough to catch a glimpse
of the fires of the hell I created.

I flew up... up... up...
high in the sky with hawks
tearing apart their prey
like it was nothing.

I was your prey.
You were my hawk.

I was your hell.
You were my heaven.

I was your lost cause.
You were my purpose.

I walked toward... toward... toward...
the black door of goodbyes...

I ran away... away... away...
far enough to not see my past,
yet close enough to still feel the pain.

Written BY: EllaRosieCheeks
Date Written: March 29,2016

Close Enough To Still Feel The Pain
Tuesday, April 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
Kagiso Mogale 05 May 2016

The past cannot be erased & the pain remains still

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2016

Love and pain! Lost soul with heavy heart. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ella Rose 22 April 2016

many thanks Edward for your kind feedback :)

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Savita Tyagi 21 April 2016

Beautiful portrait!

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Savita Tyagi 21 April 2016

Beautiful poem written in a very unique and imaginative way. You have touched the heights of pain and bounced back again. I flew up..up...and up.....tearing away their prey...a sense of taking revenge and also a sense of liberating from it. Thanks for sharing.

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Ella Rose 21 April 2016

thank you very much Savita :) You are very sweet, I plan on reading some of your poems tonight as well. ~ellarose~

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