Criticism can cut close to the bone,
An area where sensitivity hides;
Make it rather close to the vest,
so squabble won't start from both sides.
Attitude in a cautious or
Reserved manner is pleasing;
Instead of insulting words,
one must use the art of evaluating.
Negative notice can bring
Elation to the ears and heart;
Sour sentence can be sweet,
so success won't fall apart.
Sincere statement deserves attention,
Offensive one makes heart as cold as ice;
Unbearable lines are deafening
as they are also sore to the eyes.
They are too bad to be accepted,
Harsh words as they are;
Wreaking havoc to one's senses,
leaving him with a big wound and scar.
Extremely spoken or written words
Cut completely the connection;
Too intense and cruel expression
makes it close to the bone.
As criticism can cut close to the bone we mustn't criticize other. We must behave in good manner. Sincere statement deserves attention, so it should be applied. This is a beautiful poem with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.10
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A good lesson on human relations, sir Bernard.