Clouds Poem by Sandra Feldman

Clouds

Rating: 4.2


How strange,
The clouds derange,
My peaceful day,
Intensive gray,
That will not stay,
Just floats away,
Perpetual change,
How strange.

The changing shapes,
The light that drapes,
Some shadows,
Memories,
The clouds are here,
And then there gone,
Like certainly will we

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 13 November 2012

i like this but check out your spelling of they are/they're in last stanza. and what do you think about changing last line to like certainly we will be? thanks for sharing. bri edwards

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Marilyn Lott 24 October 2012

Very nice, Sandra. I also have a poem with the same title. I take pictures of them all the time. So amazing they are. Hugs

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