Clouds Of Silver Rain Poem by Frank Bana

Clouds Of Silver Rain

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The heavy clouds build up once more
Accumulating vast array
These clouds turn up the temperature
Building pressure hour by hour
In distant corners of the brain

They make me thirst for the kind of rain
That bursts as if shattering a dam
At first in almost hesitant flow
Then leaping with abandonment
Into a freedom void unknown

Thick limpid drops in Africa
Thudding down on a metal roof
Drowning out all sounds and sights
All music of the village life
Urgent European rain
Hammering on concrete squares
Leaving silver rivulets
To lap at seeds and tangled roots

These darkening low-hanging clouds
That tighten nerves and muscles both
Trap me in a time of drought -
Body tense, brow under sweat
The prospect of release at last
Enticing more than trails of stars

In the parched savannah plains
To catch the early drops that fall
I long to leap as high as clouds
And rush into the arms of rain -
To bathe the rain in my delight
Inviting it to fall again.

You are the clouds of silver rain,
The rain is where I love you most
And where your love washes my pain
And makes me whole, complete again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 10 May 2007

I love this poem Frank, it speaks so passionately of your love for Africa. The imagery you use is second to none..... and at the end, though sad, it resonates. A lovely poem. HG: -) xx

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Ruby Root 13 July 2006

Excellent poem Frank, Deep emotion, great imagery. Your a compassionate writer. This was sad at the end. Take care.

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Ernestine Northover 29 June 2006

This is a delightful read Frank, a lovely flow of words and a wonderfully constructed poem with a lovely story to tell. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX

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