Clowns, Butterflies, Dog Comments

I like it. Very deep and honisty and truth.

interesting write............. but........

i like your poem and i like the way it flows. great vocabulary and imagery, i cant say i fully understand the meaning of the poem, but it seems like a job well done. keep writing.

Written interestingly.. i must compliment your thoughts! :)

I love it.Your poem has such great imagery.

what a wonderful poem... i love how god is so powerful which is truely is great write.. Krista

Absolutely wonderful write. The humor is great & the message unmistakeable. And hey - I agree - IRONICALLY, very complimentary... after all we know who man's best friend is :)

Great work! haha thats the first time I have ever read God bakwards! =) Great creativity, I love the part about how God could measure the unvierse to the exact pound! -Mary

Dear Arthur Knackmus, thanks for sharing. I give a 10 to your poem the reasons being the imagination, the surprising pictures, the unique approach. Believer or not the poet could write the same verses, with a light humor, and a bit of suspense to energise the pictures and send the message of His Mightiness or of our weakness Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

I gave this a 10 because it was creatively unique and a pleasure to read for those who believe or don't. That is hard to do. A worthy achievement. GW62