Neela Nath Das


Cobweb - Poem by Neela Nath Das

From the blank sheet of night
A Spider dropped on my head.
I turned to an insect
And got stuck in the trap
Of a cobweb.
No way to escape.

Topic(s) of this poem: luck


Comments about Cobweb by Neela Nath Das

  • (1/8/2017 11:52:00 PM)

    MY OPINE
    HAI NEELA HOW ARE YOU I LIKED YOUR POEMS AND AM ALSO A MEMBER IN POEM HUNTER ANY WAY GOOD ONE (Report) Reply

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  • Abduhoo Salamath (8/24/2016 1:20:00 PM)


    what a imagination.. wonderful (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2015 11:47:00 AM)


    Your language and imagery in this short poem is remarkable. Here are the thoughts that crossed my mind. We try to do good in life and still get trapped. Goodness brings its own problems. Or life turns us into an insect and no release out of it. I wonder what dilemma is behind your thought. Loved the expression any way. Nice to read you again. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (10/28/2015 2:27:00 AM)


    Thoughtfull person can't get out from thought like an insect from cobweb's net. A philosophical write I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - - - -10 (Report) Reply

  • (10/27/2015 1:46:00 PM)


    Sometimes I fear to praise a poem which is more than sad or painful
    Or fearful... but a piece of art.
    Where I can't come or go to share the feelings or to listen or say,
    How can I say well done or good.
    To be fair, I myself don't feel awkward when someone praises my poem
    with such feelings.
    This poem too a piece of art
    BEST WISHES
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  • Rajnish Manga (10/27/2015 1:39:00 PM)


    Amazing poem and a mystic imagery. I love this philosophical poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2015



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